We have recently had a workshop based on blogging. This was to get an idea of how to write more professionally and correctly when writing our blog posts. Our tutors explained to get out of the habit of writing in first person as this suggests a more informal tone. Writing like this suggests an opinion rather than a fact, in doing so it creates less confident within work and critical writing. When explained, this made perfect sense and something that needed to be addressed to both past and future blog posts. In doing so will make my work and analysis more confident and clear.
TASK 1 (Re-write a post of you work in third person).
After
discussing ideas and concepts with peers I have finally decided what my
campaign is going to be. Through all of my ideas I have wanted to focus
on the idea of personality within my campaign. This is the main element within
my site and so think it is only fitting that I incorporate it with my print
based media also. From this I have merged this idea with my previous idea of
questions. The idea being the slogan of the campaign 'What's
Your Coffee Saying About You'. I think this plays on the idea of something
being said about you personally and so feel it creates intrigue to
the viewer, without coming across as negative. I want to apply this slogan
across all media so there is consistency across the campaign. I want
to make the campaign more like a teaser. I want to explore the idea of
using the content with my site without too
much explanatory information into what this is. I think this adds to
the idea that something is being said about you and so you want to find out
what it is (hopefully making them go on the website). I am thinking of using
the quotes as well as the key personality traits that are discussed on my
website and using these as the content on my campaign. People will not
know what they are describing until they go on the site, creation further intrigue.
WOULD BE CHANGED TO:
Through all of the ideas it is only fitting if a personality
theme is used across all of the campaign. This is so both website and print
campaign have a coherent link across both web and the print based media. The
idea behind the whole concept of the campaign is ‘What’ Your Coffee Saying
About You?’. This plays on the idea that something is being said about your
personality, creating intrigue to the viewer, making them want to visit the
site. This slogan will be applied across all media to create consistency to the
campaign. It will be a sort of ‘teaser’ campaign, exploring the idea of not
relying too much on explanatory information into what it is about. The content
within this campaign will be quotes and key personality traits that are shown
on the website. Viewers will not know what these are describing and adds to the
idea of something being said about you, creating further intrigue.
TASK 2 (Find a blog entry with a design decision based on preference/aesthetic and re-write using only objective justifications such as communication, research, audience, contextual, literature).
I have
now began development on my napkin design. I was unsure whether
to continue the theme of having quite a lot of content on the napkin (the
same as my cup) or have single words. The single words would be in keeping with
the same idea of the teaser campaign. There would be a personality
word or quote, and again viewers will not know what it is about. I
have tried applying the different texts but felt it did not work as well as it
did when on the cup. From then on I tried single words to see if that worked
better.
WOULD BE CHANGED TO:
Development has begun on my napkin. Different texts have
been applied in a similar way to the previous cup experiment, however due to
size of the napkin and legibility issues this would not work as well as a
single word experiment. The type would look far too chaotic and not appeal to
the viewers, as they would see it as too overwhelming.
Describing: Using adjectives to discussing the appearance
Analysing: Discussing the deeper meaning of a design
Evaluating: How and why you have done something
Contextualising: To look at something depending on the
context. Historical context. Framing the work within a particular context.
Theorising: To form a theory about something
Narrating: Application of a narrative.
TASK 3 (Choose a post with lots of small design decision/stream of images. Summarise/evaluate all of these images).
Here are the developed final outcomes for the coaster
designs. The same layout and typeface has been applied throughout all six
designs.
TASK 4 (Write the next blog post that is getting published on blog with the techniques we have learnt today).
To start of this brief the client was asked to show what the look and feel of Best Buds was. They were asked to show their logo and business card as some sort of starting point. However the card that was given had no sense of a business. It had no original identity, the name of the business was written in a bland and uninteresting way. The client thought the card was 'modern and contemporary' which gave some indication this is what they were aiming to do, however the outcome was unsuccessful. As Best Buds had no solid identity, this gave creative freedom as to what could be designed. The client was open to any suggestions as long as long as it had feminine qualities as well as being 'modern'.